It's an honor, really. I never expected my writing would end up in a sermon, myself.
Any English teacher would grind their teeth to nubs reading my work. I write how I talk and think, which is not grammatically correct. Plus, I started writing with submitting to Untold as my goal, so I write with the spoken word (as opposed to written word) in the forefront.
Points of ellipses is my favorite punctuation, although I use commas more often.
A little side note about the time travel aspect, I made the angel use both future and past tenses in one sentence. I'll be honest: I don't remember if that was on purpose or not.